The pie charts below shoe the main reasons why students chose to study at a particular UK University in 1987 and 2007
The given graph illustrates some reasons underlined behind the decision of choosing to become a student in one university located in UK in two inspected years: 1887 and 2007 .
Overall, it can be easily seen that the reason of suitable degree courses accounted for the largest proportion in both mentioned years.
To be specific, in 1987, 35% of surveyed students had the tendency to study at the UK university due to suitable degree course, then the percentage of students with the same reason increased by 2% in 20 years later. Quality of resources was the main reason achieving the second ranking in 1987 with 21% according to the respondents, while in 2007 the second position was true for the case of close to parental with 22%.
For the first mentioned year, the least reason chosen by the students for their university decision was close to parental with just 10%, while quality of teaching and quality of resource were received more than 5%, 9% of students’ vote, respectively. In contrast, just 6% of students chose quality of resources, which was 2% lower than quality of teaching and three times lower than close to parental, achieving the lowest percentage in 2007.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, then, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94974874372 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6441964753 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56783919598 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.8906518315 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.166666667 112.824112599 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.1666666667 22.9334400587 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235955870437 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117555100602 0.103423049105 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066421117398 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134518264107 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742028400302 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.2329268293 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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