The pie charts below show exports between the US and Vietnam.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The pie chart illustrate the export between two countries (US and Vietnam). The units is measured in millions. Overall Vietnam exported coffee mostly whereas the US exported most of the aircraft parts.
With regard of the amount exported, Vietnam exported total of $51.7 which comprises of vast variety of products, coffee being the highest with $23 whereas products that fall under other and Garments was the least exported which is only $2 individually, the second highest was the Fruits and vegetables with total amount of $16. Rice and seafood almost amounted the same number which $4.3 and $4.4 respectively.
The amount of export done by the US was triple the amount of Vietnam. Aircraft parts being the highest at amount of $72, as compared to Vietnam others were the second highest exports with $35, the export of cotton was double the export of cars that is $6, machinery being the third highest exports in the US with just $30.5 and the last was the fertilisers which stood to $16.5.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, third, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 807.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83233532934 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40658081847 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526946107784 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 109.823048769 43.030603864 255% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 115.285714286 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17136418036 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107064719604 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101865589003 0.0843802449381 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146190562965 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0885043759914 0.0819641961636 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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