Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
During our life, people face numerous challenges and have to make some bold decisions. They are the one who believe in living the same life and doing the same thing . On the other hand, there are people who love challenges, and accepting those challenges leads to changes. In my way of thinking both has a positive effect. I prefer to take risk in order to achieve somethings in life.
There are some who argues that doing the same thing again and again is better for them and doing that will thing will ultimately surpass their comfort zone. For instance, the person will know what to expect from the job and by doing that what reward he or she will get. Furthermore, performing that activity consecutively will decrease that persons creativity and that person will not able to evolve in their personal and professional life. As far as i am concerned that type of routine might be utterly monotonous.
Conversely, there are some who prefer changes is necessary to evolve. in my perspective, challenges might led us to become a better version of yourself and also cope up with the changing environment. Taking challenges meaning leaving your comfort zone. As to illustrate this idea, One would prefer to get a better job and that person will keep on changing till he or she gets what they wanted. To throw some light on this idea, coming from a small town and going to metro cities will lead to bring change in that person both emotionally and physically.
In conclusion, while i feel both have the effective argument, and as far as i am concerned changes are necessary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, furthermore, if, so, while, as to, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74181818182 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.566465757 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8945011823 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9333333333 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231120769458 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772148557371 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596973776231 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131982055008 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392640402312 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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