The pie charts depict the percentage of the water usage in three sectors and in 6 different parts of the world. From an overall perspective, it can be noted that water consumption in the agricultural sector attains the highest percentages in two third of the presented locations, whereas, the remaining one-third goes for industrial usage.
In more details, water consumption in agriculture, reaches its peak of 88% in Central Asia followed by Africa and Southeast Asia with a precisely small variance, 84% and 81% respectively. Whereas, Europe has the least consumption of water in that sector, 32% to specific. However, South and North America came fourth and fifth, subsequently.
In addition, water usage in the industrial sector is two times higher in Europe, forming nearly half of the consumption in comparison with the other two sectors and relatively, the same case is demonstrated in North America. The rest of the presented locations' consumption percentages, ranged between 5 to 12 percent.
It is also worth mentioning that domestic water usage has the lowest overall percentages, with highest being 19% claimed by South America proceeded by Europe with a 4% divergence and another 2% to reach North America. Furthermore, 9% is allocated for housing consumption in Africa and a tie at 7% is reached by citizens of Central and Southeast Asia.
- The charts below show the growth in the population in some of the world’s largest cities as well as the population distribution in urban and rural areas. 73
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 78
- Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 78
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement? 95
- In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.Why is this the case?What can be done about this problem? 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 252, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'locations'' or 'location's'?
Suggestion: locations'; location's
...orth America. The rest of the presented locations consumption percentages, ranged between...
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Line 7, column 91, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the highest'.
Suggestion: with the highest
...age has the lowest overall percentages, with highest being 19% claimed by South America proc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, third, whereas, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1146.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23287671233 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01953219822 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570776255708 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 283.868780488 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.023573668 43.030603864 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.333333333 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103093112042 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506585075148 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693485457328 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0667856464398 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572433649754 0.0819641961636 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 40.7170731707 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.