The pie charts show the result of a survey conducted by a university library to find out the opinions of full-time students and part-time students about its service.
The pie charts give the information about the result of a survey carried out by a university library to get the opinions of both students ( full-time and part-time) about its IT support and opening hours.
Overall, it is clear that more full-time students are happy with the IT support than part-time students.While with the opening hours, most students in part-time and full-time were satisfied.
To begin with the IT support, 55% of full-time students were happy. By contrast, just 20% of part-time students felt pleasure. The proportion of students felt quite happy are similar, 32% and 35%, respectively. Not at all full-time students felt happy has the lowest proportion( 13%) while this case in part-time students is the highest proportion with 45%.
The vast majority in both students were satisfied with the time opening. Some students felt quite satisfied respective full-time and part-time 32% and 35%. Finally, only a small minority of students were not at all felt happy - just 5% or less.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ary to get the opinions of both students full-time and part-time about its IT sup...
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...s full-time and part-time about its IT support and opening hours. Overall, it is clea...
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...more full-time students are happy with the IT support than part-time students.While w...
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... the IT support than part-time students.While with the opening hours, most students i...
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...ull-time were satisfied. To begin with the IT support, 55% of full-time students were...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, so, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 836.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12883435583 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74016004952 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521472392638 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.7467718323 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8888888889 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.499328798137 0.215688989381 232% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.244666987711 0.103423049105 237% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151781974167 0.0843802449381 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.37086902935 0.15604864568 238% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135876354143 0.0819641961636 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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