The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.
The two pie charts compare the nutritional consistency between two meals : medium baked potato and macaroni .
Overall, the percentage of carbonhydrates and saturated fat in macaroni are larger than these in medium baked potato while remaining nutrients are smaller
In both two dinners, the amout of carbonhydrates are the highest which account for 35 percent in medium baked potato and over a half in macaroni. In addition, the proportion of saturated fat in macaroni make up to 21 percent but in potato is smaller about 10 percent.
It is clear that remaining nutrients : glucose, other nutrients, protein in macaroni are less than these in medium baked potato. There is a minority of other nutrients in macaroni which account for only 5 percent but this in other dinner consist of 15 percent. The amount of glucose and protein in macaroni are more balanced with the same rate 11 percent. But these in medium baked potato are higher, about 15 percent and 25 percent, respectively
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...meals : medium baked potato and macaroni . Overall, the percentage of carbonhydr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 820.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03067484663 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73801642136 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515337423313 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.69559718 43.030603864 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.142857143 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0696450770456 0.215688989381 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450228706895 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768794798742 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0691693751221 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0902771538036 0.0819641961636 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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