Topic : in some countries, many people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think it is a positive or negative development
In some nations nowadays, living alone is become the popular choice of many people than in the past. In my point of view, I claim living by oneself gives people advantages. This essay will dicuss about benefits and detriments.
On the one hand, one-person households can be a positive development for individuals and economy. First of all, people who live alone are become independent. To be more details, people specially youngster can learn how to cook, do household chores and some daily basis, comprise manage their time and money in order to fulfill their specific aims. In the result, it enables for people to enhace life skills which can be assist them in the future. Moreover, this tendency also increase demand for housing. Living alone brings benefits for construction industry. Because of high rates people who tend to live alone, more accommodations and malls are builed today so it creat good conditions for development for economy.
On the other hand, there are several negative aspects of this tendency. Firstly, people who live alone may experience feelings of loneliness, isolation and worry. This means that they miss out on emotional support and family coversation. For example, students who study abroad can not come back home and gathering with family members on special holidays such as Tet. Futhermore, because of rise in demand for housing, people suffer many difficulties. In particular, property prices and rents are push up. For instance, people must pay for some needs such as houses, vehicles but the cost increase everyday so someday, they will not have ability to charge.
In conclusion, in my opinion, there are more positive elements about living alone nowadays. It helps people to cultivate useful skills but it may effect to sensation a lots.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 598, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... houses, vehicles but the cost increase everyday so someday, they will not have ability ...
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Line 4, column 146, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...e to cultivate useful skills but it may effect to sensation a lots.
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Line 4, column 166, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...l skills but it may effect to sensation a lots.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, such as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12714776632 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60326913537 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611683848797 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2930299534 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5263157895 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3157894737 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.52631578947 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23984651333 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749047132663 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758527226969 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158358333226 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528609532221 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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