In some countries, many people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
These days, more and more people are choosing to be single, especially in metropolitan areas. In highly developed countries, the rate is even higher, and seems like this has become quite normal here. I believe that this trend has more negative effects than the few positive outcomes it offers.
First, the single-person family is seen to have fewer financial bills than the others. Since there is only one person who is using the electricity and the water, the amount of money he has to pay seems to be much lower. As a result, there will be fewer economic problems, which is a huge trouble in some other families. Moreover, when a person is living independently, there will be more basic skills which he will cover. Daily skills including cooking, cleaning the house, adopting hobbies, and managing personal finance are essential, these can not only help him being more self-dependent but also has a greater impact on the development of the country.
However, the trend of increasing single-person families has many negative consequences. As there is only one family member, he might have to suffer from some psychological problems such as anxiety or depression. Unlike the traditional families where you can share stress and sadness between members, there is unlikely anyone for the single-member to share their feelings. The isolation often leads people to a negative lifestyle, they might as well rely on drugs and some of them become addicted. The human is a social being and living alone is against their natural tendency. For many, bearing the total expenses is tough and this leads them to get involved in crimes, which can be a huge problem for society.
In conclusion, although there are some benefits of choosing to live alone, the disadvantages it brings are far worse.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, well, as to, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02356902357 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71978020562 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589225589226 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3823487759 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172958680943 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573123774454 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420386807605 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107584135845 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339073490982 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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