Some people think that they should be able to keep the money they earn and do not have to pay tax. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Taxation has been opposed by certain demographics of society. These people claim that they should be allowed to maintain their money and be exempted from that system. This essay will discuss why tax is entirely necessary and should not be revoked.
To begin with, tax plays a crucial role in the development of businesses. For companies to flourish in the country, the infrastructure has to be good enough to cater for their demands. For example, if the transportation systems weren’t satisfactory, goods from a company could not be delivered to other places. This leads to the emergence of various problems such as overproduction and quality fade.
Furthermore, it will help improve the quality of the citizens’ life, especially for the low-income ones. Tax is a major source of government revenue for social welfare which ensures members of a society can meet basic human needs. Let take the education aspect as an example. With high taxes, in Germany, students do not charge tuition fees for studying which makes the illiteracy rate in that country stand at only 1% in 2018.
Critics of the above idea might claim that they deserve to earn the exact amount of money compared to their workload without paying any income tax. This is true to some extent except for the poor. Were tax to not appear, those individuals’ children would not have sufficient education and other supports. Therefore, the next generations of that family would be at risk of continual poverty.
To conclude, tax is indeed crucial in developing a company as well as providing the public with social welfare. Every individual deserves to have their basic needs met.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 164, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "needs met" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'met' or 'to be met'.
Suggestion: met; to be met
...dual deserves to have their basic needs met.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, as to, except for, for example, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05860805861 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7495863105 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6336996337 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.606140177 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2352941176 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0588235294 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232765968921 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619999914437 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577654786812 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118849120547 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688179894656 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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