Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising it so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discus both views and give your own opinion.
Whole world is now following one motto in business world is "Jo Dikhta he vahi Bikta he" means whatever you will see on screen or anywhere posted that product will sell more than the product which is not advertising. Advertising is the most powerful method to sell your product to people, but nowadays every small businessmen is doing advertisement that people now find it common and ignore the product they are trying to sell. I personally think that apart from some common ways of advertisements, advertising is the excellent way to show your product to the people.
On one hand, advertisement are a very powerful for attracting people towards the products it represents, as advertisements has many mediums, such as newspapers, pamphlets, hoardings, video advertising on TV, mobile phones, social media, etc. If one will see same advertisement everywhere he looks, on TV, mobile, newspapers he/she might get this product on his/her mind and eventually buy it. Moreover, video advertisements are now more effective because it includes visual representation of the products they are selling and due to some editing features in the video that will make product look more efficient and promising that people will buy this product easily.
On the other hand, nowadays, because of low cost of advertising any person can buy it and do its advertisement. Due to same product is being sold by different manufacturers on different name and all are doing advertisements, people will be bored with that advertisements and focus on ignoring that product. Advertising is now on every platform of human's common life that a person will get easily bored with seeing one advertisement over and over.
In conclusion, advertisements are more beneficial when your product is unique and has better quality than others, but it will get ignore by more people if more persons are advertising about it.
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| 2020-11-30 | Kaishal Ozarker | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 292, Rule ID: LOOK_WATCH[2]
Message: Did you mean 'watches'?
Suggestion: watches
...ll see same advertisement everywhere he looks, on TV, mobile, newspapers he/she might...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, so, apart from, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 5.60731707317 571% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 965.302439024 165% => OK
No of words: 307.0 196.424390244 156% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18241042345 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02416640523 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 106.607317073 154% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534201954397 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 283.868780488 177% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.1898363486 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.1 112.824112599 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7 22.9334400587 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 5.23603664747 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191114644073 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099843867459 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451820574123 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136706499216 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0081840263064 0.0819641961636 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 61.2550243902 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 40.7170731707 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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