The table below illustrates weekly consumption by age group of dairy products in a European country.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The stipulated table depicts quantities of full fat and low fat versions of milk and butter, that are consumed per week by individuals in four distinct age group in a European country.
Overall, despite consuming both commodities in the least amount, full fat version of both is most preferred by denizens below the age of 25. Seemingly with advancing age, low fat content is given more preference in both cases.
Regarding the figures for milk, these are 65 plus occupying the top position with figures 700 ml more than that of under 25 people(1900 ml versus 1200 ml). The scenario, however, is reversed in consuming in drinking full fat content, in which the youngest people dominate the oldest rivals with a wide margin of nearly two-fold(59% against 30%). In low fat category consumption, 26-45-year-old have an indisputable dominance with an index of 80%, whereas the bottom place is occupied by youngest ones, at merely 41%.
In regards to butter related figures, while 45 or above consume 90 gram butter collectively, this commodity is consumed nearly three times less together by the other two. Fat is given no significance by the two previous groups, the youngest and the second youngest bands have greater inclination toward full fat and low fat respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: Regarding; With regard to
...ed by youngest ones, at merely 41%. In regards to butter related figures, while 45 or abo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, regarding, second, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1065.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07142857143 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7782806801 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 106.607317073 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647619047619 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6938002698 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.125 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0504632063304 0.215688989381 23% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0270067111698 0.103423049105 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432074520565 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0461152271379 0.15604864568 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532088347477 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 40.7170731707 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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