The table below illustrates weekly consumption by age group of dairy products in a European country Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The table below illustrates weekly consumption by age group of dairy products in a European country.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table describes the consumption of milk and butter in various age groups in a European country over a week. Milk and butter segregate as full fat and low fat.

Overall, the highest position of milk consumers is elderly such as 1900ml, while butter takers are between the age of 45 to 65 years old with 60gm. Similarly, youngsters below 25 years are the lowest grade of dairy consumption in milk( 1200ml) and butter (12gm).

To begin with milk, under 25 years, consume full fat and low fat approximately 59% and 41% respectively. While, 25to 45years group, used 1650ml of milk in a week, which is 20ml lower than people up to 65years with 1670ml. Whereas, all age group above 26 years consumes more low-fat milk than full fat, which includes up to 45years are at the top level with 80%. The remaining groups are 70% in the above 65years and 55% in 45to 65 years.

On the other hand, compared to below 25years, most people older than 26years consumes more low-fat butter than full fat. Such as, when 65% of people under 25 use full fat in contrast to below 50% of the remaining three groups. Likewise, most of the adults takes 50% or above low fat unlike 40% of 25years and below. Moreover, up to 45years consumes mere 19gm of butter, while, 60gm and 30gm of butter was used by people above 45years in a week.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, likewise, moreover, similarly, whereas, while, in contrast, such as, in contrast to, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1079.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 238.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53361344538 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2430403784 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.7879978543 43.030603864 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.9166666667 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 5.23603664747 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107243831942 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555841988033 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749664343252 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895789568292 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548606382613 0.0819641961636 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.03 61.2550243902 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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