Many people are using credit cards or loans to run up huge personal debts that they may be unable to repay. It should, therefore, be made more difficult for individuals to borrow large amounts of money.
What is your opinion on this?
It is an actual fact in the field of banking program that to use credit card or apply loan for vast amount of money to be debit. While, it is essential for all category of citizen to role on money in order to mitigate dilemma to hold and exchange. However, in my opinion about this phenomenon that, this trend is effective and efficient way of lending and borrowing of large money for various purposes. People may surpass the difficulties of tax, saving problems, presumably they could manage the financial problems irrespective of daily needs.
On the one hand, usage of credit card or loan facilities would enhance the personal dreams of many. In other words, by the help of such money borrowing way most people would fulfill their needs and wishes in a systematic manner. To illustrates, banks are providing money by loan for housing, study, vehicle and so on, thereby, people could get money at the prime time which may use to deal. Secondly, By the help of credit cards, many employees or card holders to repay money which is borrowed without interfere essential daily needs to some extent. During the time of salary the amount would be hold by bank system and the customer might be satisfy too.
On the other hand, it is very problematic to carry huge amount of money by hand by the reason that, the fear of robbery, burglary, theft and other social issues. Having such an amount would be reduce the peace, and people may face emphasized difficulties to be safe and protective. Similarly, borrowing large amount at a time would increase the tax services for the exchanging money to the core and need to be mention the details of purpose and progress by allotted money. Owing to the fact that, have had a loan or by credit card people would manage money matters in a safe and secure way without losing interest and penalty.
To sum up, in the modern world, usage of credit card and loan system has been escalated rapidly. However, such trend would be beneficial to the public and authorized system to overcome multitude of impacts with holding more amount of money to some extent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'fact'.
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...lems irrespective of daily needs. On the one hand, usage of credit card or l...
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...ve of daily needs. On the one hand, usage of credit card or loan facilities ...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a systematic manner" with adverb for "systematic"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...le would fulfill their needs and wishes in a systematic manner. To illustrates, banks are providing mo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, while, in my opinion, in other words, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72404371585 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40906304591 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502732240437 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.2068693285 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 115.266666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365483082012 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121465842834 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475817648919 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226886521282 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418584295424 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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