The table below provides information on rental charges and salaries in three areas of London.
You should write at least 150 words.
The given table illustrates data about the accommodation expenses per week and the annual wages in three different areas of London. Overall, it can be seen that although Nothing Hill is the most expensive in terms of renting a property, it is also the wealthiest among the given locations.
Looking at the details, the 1-bed housing is far the cheapest among the three areas, with 375 pounds spent weekly on it in Nothing Hill, 325 in Regent's Park and only 215 in Fulham. This amount doubles when it comes about a property with 3 beds in the first 2 areas. By contrast, people from Fulham have to pay 3 times the amount if they want to leave in a 3-bed property, as compared with the 1-bed one.
With regards to the salaries, the trend matches the tendency in the level of rents for each area. The income for those living in 1-bed accommodation in Nothing Hill is slightly higher than that of dwellers of Regent's Park, of 98.500 and 85.500 pounds per year, respectively. This is only half those who live in 3-bed places, with a salary of 194.000 and 170.500 pounds, respectively. However, in the least expensive area regarding the rents, this income is triple for those who have the largest accommodation as compared to those with those who have only 1 bed in their shelter.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...hree different areas of London. Overall, it can be seen that although Nothing Hil...
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...east expensive area regarding the rents, this income is triple for those who have...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, regarding, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 5.60731707317 285% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1052.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 227.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63436123348 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48351900299 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568281938326 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0285175387 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.888888889 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2222222222 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0741550820602 0.215688989381 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0346836064067 0.103423049105 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439650718223 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0541882592682 0.15604864568 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256730632551 0.0819641961636 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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