The given table shows in figures preference to music among the young people in Tokyo, Japan. The pie chart illustrates the same percentage wise preference to live and recorded music.
Overall , both the genders listened to music ,males enjoyed music in Japan more compared to their counterparts. Females were interested more in CDs than males. Live music was preferred more, than recorded music as a mode of listening.
Among the males about 60% listened to live music compared to 44 %in females. Similarly males also were more interested in MP-3 players with 79%of them listening to music via this, in contrast to females which were 40%. However, internet was preferred almost similarly with 55%in males and 42% in females. CDs showed a stark contrast, with higher proportion of females listening to music than males 19 and 22 %, respectively.
Turning to the pie chart, 70% of the people preferred live music when compared to 26% of them listening to the recorded version and 4 % did not know what type of music they preferred listening to.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, similarly, so, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04022988506 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56361496259 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563218390805 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9505944887 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311800436017 0.215688989381 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143663724226 0.103423049105 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112389322384 0.0843802449381 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235345851105 0.15604864568 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124295134429 0.0819641961636 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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