the table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries.
The table gives information and predictions related to the change in the proportion of the population having age 65 and more in Canada, Germany and UK in three different years 1988, 2000, 2030.
Overall, it has been seen clearly that the population percentage of people with age 65 and above was more in Germany over given period of time as compared to other countries but least in UK. Both, Canada and Germany had around 10% increase in population of old people in final year as compared ti start year.
Growth in the number of old people had been seen from 1988 to 2030 in all the three countries. in Germany, people of age 65 and more were 20.45% and constant rise of almost 5% had been observed in 2000 and 2030(25.32% and 30.42% respectively.)
On the other hand, only 14.23% of the UK people were above 65 and more in 1988 and slight rise had been observers till 2000(14.89%) which rose to 20.35% in 2030. Although there was only around 2% in the number of old people between UK and Canada in 1988. But growth in the population of old people was more in final year in Canada in last year(2030) that is 26.35%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 129, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...nd above was more in Germany over given period of time as compared to other countries but leas...
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Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...988 to 2030 in all the three countries. in Germany, people of age 65 and more were...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48529411765 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33882098966 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490196078431 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1180321502 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.375 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196718247508 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935505229889 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0931094912111 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147527092631 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0978339852538 0.0819641961636 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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