Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed. What is the reason behind this? Is this a negative or positive development?
In present time, parents do not understand the interest of their children but force them to perform really well in academics because father and mother believe that it will help their minors to get a good job and another reason is due to the competitive nature of society. But, it retards the physical and mental growth of the children.
Parents think that doing well in schools and universities and getting a good score in examinations will help their teenagers to get jobs in well reputed companies so they force their children not to waste time on doing other physical or recreational activities instead stick to their school books. Another reason is that father and mother push their minors to succeed in all the fields due to the competitive behaviour of the area where they are living. They want their youngsters to perform best among all the children of the society so that everyone would praise their child and they can move in the area with pride.
But, this kind of nature of parents will lead to various problems in child's life. Sitting and studying academic courses for whole day and not doing any fun or physical activities make them physically sick, dull and lazy. They may suffer from various health issues like obesity as well. On the other hand, thought of competing with other children in all the domains like examination, sports, arts etcetera, rise a fear in the mind of teenagers. As a result, child suffers from depression retarding their mental growth.
To conclude, academics is essential part of life but not only the way to get a good job. Parents should understand the interest of their children and help them to expertise in that rather than forcing him/her to get excel in all the fields otherwise it will lead to different health and brain related problems effecting the overall growth and development of children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, really, so, well, kind of, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86392405063 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45299301499 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509493670886 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.9040191359 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.083333333 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164650280959 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597819347609 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442624211771 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104999412048 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226541833065 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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