The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table and pie charts demonstrate the comparison of the results of the surveys in (the) Ashdown Museum, including the number of visitors and satisfaction, between the year before and after the refurbishment.
Overall, the museum has become more popular due to the renovation, whose visitors increased by 18000 from 74000 in the year before redecoration. Besides, in the survey, the interviewees had fine options about their visiting experience.
Overall, compared with the previous decoration of the museum, the average satisfaction in the situation, where the buildings have been refurbishment, has improved. At the meantime, more people feel satisfied and very satisfied, the percentages, therefore, grew from 30% and 15% to 40% and 35% respectively, whereas the figures for 'Dissatisfied' and 'very Dissatisfied' comments shrank from 40% and 10% to 15% and 5%. further, the ratio of people(5%), who did not have opinions n, were not influenced by the refurbishment.
- The tables below 11
- the bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 84
- in some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting universities studies. 67
- Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 56
- Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Further
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, so, therefore, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 818.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45333333333 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20455231749 2.65546596893 121% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626666666667 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9036870181 43.030603864 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.333333333 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222387849837 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105569810524 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108533630431 0.0843802449381 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178734474907 0.15604864568 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118667645766 0.0819641961636 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.2329268293 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 11.4140731707 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.06136585366 122% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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