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This table provides us information about nominal data between three countries and their planned costings on upcoming projects for sustainable forestry together with the expected expenditure for the first year in American dollars.

Generally, it can be seen that in West Africa and Central America, there will be a big decrease between first and fifth year in the amount of money. However, in South -east Asia, it will have been almost doubled by the end of fifth year.

According to West Africa, first year is planned to spend exactly 10.5 million and surprisingly, it may well be decreased dramatically with the figure of 3.5 million by the fifth year. Moreover, the same figure is for Central America, which is projected with 20 million at the beginning and it might be slightly over (5000 million) than West Africa.

By stark contrast, in terms of South-east Asia, it is anticipated 30 million to allocate for projects in the the first year and is expected to be risen for 50 million dollars to sustain forestry.

Regarding to pie chart, it is noticeable that, among planned expenditure for costings of the first year, salaries will be much higher for 50 percent, whereas, the cost for office expenses and set up costs will be just the same. (10percent). Finally, concerning set up costs, they are predicted to spend marginally lower with 30 percent than salaries.

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Average: 8.3 (4 votes)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, well, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1154.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 230.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01739130435 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60789842891 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 106.607317073 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573913043478 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.1649185092 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.25 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.75 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339327456046 0.215688989381 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14868265029 0.103423049105 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11505898119 0.0843802449381 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205468627186 0.15604864568 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10172701266 0.0819641961636 124% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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