The table below shows the results of a 20 year study into why adults in the UK attend arts events. Summarise the information by selection and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table chart compares the proportion of United Kingdom students who show keen in arts on accompanying, occasion bussion and so on between 3 decades ago and now.
Overall the total proportion of specific performance was higher in 20 years ago compared to another period of time. While the most of students attending arts study in occasion event as well as accompanying children.
The proportion of 20 years ago by candidates in performer events is highest, at 58% and 55%,56% now and 1 decade ago while the students was lower in work, account for 6% rather than the figures of 10 years ago and present time, at 10% and 11% respectively. However, in terms of special celebration the largest percentage of 27 and 20% during the 20 and 10 years ago as compared with today. Moreover, accompanying with children which has the largest proportion of attending events, at 15% and only 24% respectively in past 10 years and now.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...her in 20 years ago compared to another period of time. While the most of students attending a...
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Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the students') or simply say ''most students''.
Suggestion: most of the students; most students
...ed to another period of time. While the most of students attending arts study in occasion event ...
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Line 5, column 522, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at 15% and only 24% respectively in past 10 years and now.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 779.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89937106918 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81810137226 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591194968553 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8551865595 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.833333333 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 5.23603664747 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129044966227 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074294972108 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0176495071935 0.0843802449381 21% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.09455714505 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0157823282054 0.0819641961636 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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