The table below shows a survey on the preference of different age groups in a European country on different TV programmes in 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Given is the table delineating the rate of people at different age group who watch diferrent kinds of TV programes in a European country in 2012.
Remarkably, feature films and sports were the two most popular TV programmes in that country with the same percentage in every age bracket. Meanwhile, less people wers attractive by TV dramas, especially children aged 11-15.
It is undeniable that feature films and sports share the same percentage by viewer’s age with a fairly uniform figure of approximately 20%. Besides, there was a trend that most childrens aged 11-15 was not into watching News and TV dramas. However, that was not true for Cartoon which was the TV programme they like best with 29% compared to the Soap Opera with 17%.
When it comes to people aged 15-20, the second position for the number of viewers belong to News with 19%. While Soap Opera and TV dramas had the least viewership with 12% and 10% respectively, Cartoons and Sports accounted for 18% of the viewers together. At the age of 21-25, people tend not to love watching Cartoons anymore, specifically only 4%. They swithed to watching other types of TV shows at roughly the same rate, except for the viewers of TV dramas 13%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: fewer
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Suggestion:
...9% compared to the Soap Opera with 17%. When it comes to people aged 15-20, the ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...econd position for the number of viewers belong to News with 19%. While Soap Oper...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, second, so, while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1004.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8038277512 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52492893643 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574162679426 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.2791382239 43.030603864 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.4 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175104000523 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769247161323 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709379755542 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137333720826 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805025892742 0.0819641961636 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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