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but, first, if, so, while, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 965.302439024 136% => OK
No of words: 143.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 9.20979020979 4.92477711251 187% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45807182446 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 11.2989292736 2.65546596893 425% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 67.0 106.607317073 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468531468531 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 180.9 283.868780488 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 143.0 22.4926829268 636% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1317.0 112.824112599 1167% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 143.0 22.9334400587 624% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 32.0 5.23603664747 611% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 19.0 3.83414634146 496% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 33.0 1.69756097561 1944% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191224365057 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191224365057 0.103423049105 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0523451173494 0.15604864568 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0965177386579 0.0819641961636 118% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 93.4 13.2329268293 706% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -48.29 61.2550243902 -79% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 55.5 10.3012195122 539% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 37.32 11.4140731707 327% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.05 8.06136585366 149% => OK
difficult_words: 12.0 40.7170731707 29% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 51.0 11.4329268293 446% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 59.2 10.9970731707 538% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 56.0 11.0658536585 506% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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