The table illustrates the information about the percentage of total monthly household income five European nations spend on five different activities

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The table illustrates the information about the percentage of total monthly household income five European nations spend on five different activities.

The rendered table chart depicts information about the ratio of total monthly household earnings of five European Nations which has utilised on different activities that are has been calibrated in percentage.
As an overview, it can be easily observed from the given tabular representation the highest percentage of total income has been spent by Turkey on food and drink whereas by United Kingdom maximum ratio of it's earning has been spent on housing the percentage of money in in France and Turkey lay between the range of 7%and 10% on activities entertainment and clothing.
Initiating with the food and drink, in France and one for part of total wages has spent by the citizens on it whereas in next two kingdoms Germany and UK the ratio of total fee which has spent by these Nations lay between 20% and 30%.By contrast in case of housing ,the ratio of total income which has been spent by France and Germany is 31% and 33% respectively.
Moreover, the percentage has increased to 37% in case of UK. Meanwhile, in Turkey and Spain the proportion of spending of has hovered between 30 %and 40% When it comes to housing ,the ratio of income has remained almost same which has been spent by these countries 18 %and 20% respectively.
Turning towards the remaining details ,on clothing the maximum degree of money has been utilised by Germany and the has followed by Turkey and United Kingdom with 12 %and 11%; however, the ratio of income stipend declined dramatically to 7% in case of first country (France) .There is Steady rise and ratio has surged to 8% in case of Spain. In contrast to it, that on entertainment purposes least ratio of wages has been spent by Turkey while the ratio of income which has been spent by the habitants of Germany inclined drastically, and has reached to 19%. The utilization of salary has wavered around 20% among rest of three kingdoms Spain, United Kingdom and France.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, whereas, while, in contrast, in contrast to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 6.8 265% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 33.7804878049 195% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 965.302439024 160% => OK
No of words: 330.0 196.424390244 168% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 3.73543355544 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55473776191 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 106.607317073 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.421212121212 0.547539520022 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 483.3 283.868780488 170% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 330.0 22.4926829268 1467% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1540.0 112.824112599 1365% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 330.0 22.9334400587 1439% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 73.0 5.23603664747 1394% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191055279247 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191055279247 0.103423049105 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1577666855 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.183061127607 0.0819641961636 223% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 165.6 13.2329268293 1251% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -255.01 61.2550243902 -416% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 130.8 10.3012195122 1270% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.29 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.88 8.06136585366 284% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 11.4329268293 516% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 134.0 10.9970731707 1219% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 59.0 11.0658536585 533% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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