The table shows data on four aspects of life standard in given countries.
The table shows data on four aspects of life standard in given countries.
In general, although the statistics on the first three compared factors in country E stood at the lead position, that on infant mortality rate in country A finally took up the highest proportion, in place of country E.
On one hand, it is coincident that the number of GNP, daily calories supply and life expectancy all experienced an accelerating trend from country A to E. Specifically, in terms of GNP, while country A drew the least attention from readers with just 140 dollars per head, the last country occupied the highest with 13 160 dollars per head. Likewise, with respect to everyday calories provision, the lowest and the largest amount remained unchanged between country A and E, with 1877 from the former and 3652 from the latter. Along with that, three middle countries from B to D had exactly similar numbers with 2086, 2950 and 2296 respectively. Interestingly, the same trend can be seen in life expectancy.
On the other hand, regarding newborn death rate, the opposite tendency is noticed. For example, the rate of infant mortality in country A accounted for 132 per 1000 live births which was eleven times as high as that in country E. Moreover, in country B, the period under study witnessed a considerable amount of the last aspect with 124 deaths, making this nation become the second dangerous place for babies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: calories'; calorie's; calory's
...oincident that the number of GNP, daily calories supply and life expectancy all experien...
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Suggestion:
...a considerable amount of the last aspect with 124 deaths, making this nation beco...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, likewise, moreover, regarding, second, while, for example, in general, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1175.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 240.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89583333333 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63707210852 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 106.607317073 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616666666667 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 3.36585365854 297% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3478334499 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.5 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 5.23603664747 239% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145023751494 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114350734919 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.296053906699 0.0843802449381 351% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262081690669 0.15604864568 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.426154853543 0.0819641961636 520% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.