The table shows the income and expenditure of Brooklyn Hall, the building used to hire in over the period of three years.
The table gives information about the turnovers as well as all expenses that Brooklyn Hall has to cover in order to pay for various categories over the period of three years.
In general, Brooklyn Hall’s income came mostly from leasing rooms, and funding and increased minimally over the years. It is noticeable that Hall’s profit decreased sharply throughout the period as its expenditure rose substantially.
Looking at the figure, hiring rooms generated the most revenue for Brooklyn Hall, standing at 32000 pounds in year 1, and then slightly increased to over 1000 pounds in year 3. This figure was making up nearly half of the total income for Brooklyn Hall. The next significant income source was funding from the local council at roughly 20000 pounds, however, this was less than the subsidies by other sources, which stood at 22000 per year. There was also witnessing a gradual decline in sponsorships of both local authorities and other parties, which plunged by 2000 and 5000 pounds relatively in the third year. In contrast, cafes created a small going concern, just around 3000 in the first year, nonetheless, these profits surprisingly doubled at the end of the third examined year.
In regards to the total income, in year 1, it was 72000 pounds and then reached a peak of approximately 80000 in the final year. Despite the growth of turnovers, its profits fell from 9000 pounds to only 1000 pounds in the year 3 due to the dramatic rocket in expenditure, which experienced a considerable growth from 63000 to 77000 pounds.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: Regarding; With regard to
... the end of the third examined year. In regards to the total income, in year 1, it was 720...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, nonetheless, so, then, third, well, as to, in contrast, in general, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 965.302439024 134% => OK
No of words: 258.0 196.424390244 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02325581395 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62792984372 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 106.607317073 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596899224806 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8484233914 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.6 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.23603664747 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282323197238 0.215688989381 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112957414742 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683365899629 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175808689155 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708387600218 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 40.7170731707 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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