Task 1: The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart shows how many different professions are paid while the table gives information about the average amount of time each category works per week.
Overall, while the underground driver is the most well-paid job, the salary of the nurse is the lowest. Besides, the teacher and firefighter share the same highest working hours per week, the least belongs to the underground driver.
Looking at more details in the chart, it is transparent that the ranks of people’s salary when started and after 3 years are identical and the underground driver is given the highest amount of money, around £50000. With £40000, the firefighter ranks second, roughly more £10000 than teacher. Interestingly, the pays for police when started and after 3 years are equivalent at about £22000 and under £20000 averagely is given to the nurse.
Regarding the table, 55 hours per week is the highest number recorded in the teacher and firefighter, more than 15 hours the figure for police. With 36 hours, the underground driver requires the smallest working hours, less 2 hours than the number of the nurse.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 22, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
The chart shows how many different professions are paid while the table gi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, regarding, second, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08839779006 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5680209385 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558011049724 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5478598628 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.125 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.625 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22735288348 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962143954177 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112053242143 0.0843802449381 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156377546429 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129043851709 0.0819641961636 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.