The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities
The given maps display changes before and after of some establishments such as holiday accommodation and recreation for visitors in an island.
It is obvious that, the island has enormously been modified after setting up the facilities. The main development which has been provided in the island due to tourism is accommodation, although parts of the island are kept intact.
Overall, the greatest change in island have been developed by building up cabins for temporary residential proposes. Also, a pier is located in the south of the island for amusing travelers by sailing boats which is connected to reception in the middle of the accommodations. Meanwhile, a restaurant has been built in the north of the island, above the reception building.
However, before the construction of the facilities the island was just a bare land but after development, the large portion of eastern part of the island are untouched. As well as mentioned facilities another new facility which has been provided is swimming area on the western beach of the island. Also, there are footpath and pathway for vehicles which make it easier for people to get access effortlessly to the facilities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 329, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'pathways'?
Suggestion: pathways
...he island. Also, there are footpath and pathway for vehicles which make it easier for p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, while, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 990.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15625 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96461700613 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578125 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.0929270908 43.030603864 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 110.0 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257280449481 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107794680733 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0918988640568 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167716656026 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0821042041963 0.0819641961636 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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