The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

Essay topics:

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

The maps represent an island made some improvement by constructing tourist’s attractions.
Overall, the island is approximately 250 metres long, has few palm trees dotted around it, is surrounded by ocean and has a beach area to the west. Over the period, the island was completely transformed into tourist’s areas with pier and accommodations around.
Before the construction, the island was completely empty. There was nothing but twelve palm trees and the natural beach areas on the west of island.
After the construction, the accommodations have built at the centre of island with the restaurants and receptions in the middle of those accommodations for easier access by foot paths and vehicle tracks. Meanwhile, the island had built pier on the south of island allowing yachts access to the resort. Apart from the trees, the beach remains the only natural feature to remain relatively untouched; however it does appear that it is now used for swimming.

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Comments

Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'so', 'while', 'apart from']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.3 0.268076937826 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.133333333333 0.116061578633 115% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0555555555556 0.0759168565197 73% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0555555555556 0.0366838410393 151% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0166666666667 0.0131127313244 127% => OK
Prepositions: 0.122222222222 0.155750635184 78% => OK
Participles: 0.0444444444444 0.0379272487307 117% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.06661388303 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0166666666667 0.0210936926555 79% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.133333333333 0.0948980150116 141% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00967000014798 0% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 973.0 1161.00487805 84% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.9 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.27741935484 5.90752243213 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73763899035 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.374193548387 0.337110787985 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.232258064516 0.247514529752 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.154838709677 0.171178102325 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.141935483871 0.112407865282 126% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06661388303 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61935483871 0.546246751206 113% => OK
Word variations: 55.5776343298 49.3433353143 113% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 19.375 23.0094962315 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1943283314 42.9750493124 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.625 135.714022679 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 23.0094962315 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.625 0.689975730869 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 42.6008064516 47.7609492067 89% => OK
Elegance: 2.27027027027 2.94281807926 77% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.473953849877 0.418131533498 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.180369732441 0.181151798455 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.076645183728 0.0850326197045 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.760194830163 0.706616315825 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.118531527368 0.157042692854 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.258521013045 0.228904883108 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817284156492 0.108899403657 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.369472766176 0.367819155151 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.128622548254 0.0812612215331 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.317698120966 0.316326947829 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526840291076 0.0921553760075 57% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70731707317 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.08536585366 73% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.16585365854 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.02926829268 66% => OK
Total topic words: 5.0 7.1512195122 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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