The two maps below show the Paradise island in the past and in the present.
The graphs depict how the area of Paradise Island has transformed from the past until now.
It is worth noticing that there has been a considerable development to the island and the area is becoming a more modern tourist attraction.
The most notable difference is the introduction of a cycle path lining the area. Moreover, a scenic lookout has been erected to the top right corner of the island next to the rocks which have remained throughout time. Similarly, a new cafe has been built near the natural spring. Additionally, the beach has been kept intact yet now, people are allowed to swim there.
It is also shown in the maps that several facilities have been converted to other usage. Most notably, the scientific research station and some trees have been removed to make room for a luxurious hotel complex with a swimming pool. To the right side of the island, several trees were cut down so that an open restaurant and a BBQ area could be established. It is remarkable that the pier leading to the sea is still in its initial position yet it has been expanded and the boat near it has been replaced by an innovated cruise ship.
- The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for future years 92
- The two maps below show the Paradise island in the past and in the present 84
- The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car bus or train between 1970 and 2030 67
- Most people do not care enough about environmental issues To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20 in the last ten years Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, similarly, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64356435644 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53869186331 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613861386139 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2671854695 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0961153524678 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399608780266 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565975962494 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0788797856837 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665122563407 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.