The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given two maps below represent the way of the entrance connected the road to a CIty hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
According to the first map, there is a squire shape Ring road around the city hospital and the route to the hospital is the Hospital road joined to City road that has three routes on the east, the west and the south. On both sides of the Hospital road, there are Bus stops. However, on the east side of one of the Bus stop, a car parking area is situated for staff and public.
Moving towards to the second map, the Car parking area has been splitted up into two diffrent parts placing one in the east side of the city hospital for ordinary people and the next one is in the east side of the Hospital road for the staff. In contrast, the Bus stops has been elluminated from both sides of the Hospital road. Instead of the Bus stop there is a Bus station now at the west side of the Hospital road. The most significant constructions are two roundabouts that have been built in the entrance of the Hospital road and also infront of the city road. Both the roundabouts connect the Bus station, Staff car park, city road to the City hospital.
Looking specificallyat the second figure, it is clear that the major modification is the roundabout which can be used as a access to the road that connected with the hospital. Moreover, another development is dividing the car park into two separate places according to the particular types of people.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 122, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... is the roundabout which can be used as a access to the road that connected with ...
^
Line 7, column 122, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'access'.
Suggestion: access
... is the roundabout which can be used as a access to the road that connected with the hos...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1201.0 965.302439024 124% => OK
No of words: 268.0 196.424390244 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48134328358 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3986327276 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.436567164179 0.547539520022 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.0 283.868780488 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.408177336 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.181818182 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 5.23603664747 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241754630227 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114998177823 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890431751122 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187841630198 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.096676850268 0.0819641961636 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 122, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... is the roundabout which can be used as a access to the road that connected with ...
^
Line 7, column 122, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'access'.
Suggestion: access
... is the roundabout which can be used as a access to the road that connected with the hos...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1201.0 965.302439024 124% => OK
No of words: 268.0 196.424390244 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48134328358 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3986327276 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.436567164179 0.547539520022 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.0 283.868780488 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.408177336 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.181818182 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 5.23603664747 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241754630227 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114998177823 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890431751122 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187841630198 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.096676850268 0.0819641961636 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.