The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
The maps illustrate some changes to the road used to go city hospital over a period of three years, starting at 2007.
Overall, the road experienced considerable changes during the period shown. The most noticeable differences between the two maps are the appearances of bus station, roundabouts and Public car park.
As can be seen from the maps, from 2007 to 2010, the six bus stops, situated along the hospital road, were remove to make way for a new bus station to the west. Regarding to the parking space, Car park used for staff and public in 2007 became the area only used for staff and there was public car park constructed to the east of the city hospital.
Turning to the other features, we can see that there was a roundabout constructed at the three-way junction of the hospital road and the ring road surrounding the hospital, while the another one was located at the four-way intersection of the hospital road and the city road.
- Writing task 1 11
- Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life Is it positive or negative development 61
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010 78
- It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment such as the South Pole Do you agree or disagree with this development 73
- Writing task 1 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'removed'.
Suggestion: removed
... situated along the hospital road, were remove to make way for a new bus station to th...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 782.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71084337349 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55907131326 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560240963855 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.7486383297 43.030603864 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.333333333 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6666666667 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279522220218 0.215688989381 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131712267934 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070478215664 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172235065007 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523983438344 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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