The two maps below show the road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010
The maps compares the information about the way to get to a city hospital in two different years,2007 and 2010
Overall,it is clear that road access witnessed dramatic changes in three years.Roads are modified with two roundabouts,a bus station and separate car parking only for public.
According to the map,in 2007 the city hospital located in the centre which surrounded by a ring road.People could access the hospital from city road through hospital road.In addition,hospital road consisted of bus stops on each side.There was area for car parking for public as well as staff designated in the east side.
As can be seen,in 2010 numerous alteration had occured in the area. Th most significant contribution is the construction of two roundabouts,one in the entrance of hospital road and the other in the exist.Furthermore,the bus stops were removed and built bus station in the west.It is also evident to note that,the car parking area separated the old one remained only for staff and the new one for public which is located in the east side of the hospital
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05649717514 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1317378446 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570621468927 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 22.4926829268 196% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 119.538696663 43.030603864 278% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 223.75 112.824112599 198% => OK
Words per sentence: 44.25 22.9334400587 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.25 5.23603664747 291% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 1.69756097561 1001% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347627759491 0.215688989381 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.205086724662 0.103423049105 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134106793649 0.0843802449381 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236228394048 0.15604864568 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110699603997 0.0819641961636 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.5 13.2329268293 185% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.28 61.2550243902 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 10.3012195122 187% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.96 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 11.4329268293 245% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.9970731707 178% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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