What makes people most happy?

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What makes people most happy?

The given pie-diagrams compares a survey inference between two different age groups regarding the activities or situations that provide them happiness.

Overall, it can be noticed that although there are several similarities between the younger and the older group about the factors that makes them happy, it also comes up with certain striking differences in both age group regarding the same.

Firstly, lets focus on the similarities. Achievement at work provides the most happiness to both age groups. 31% of younger group attain happiness by achieving at work whereas 32% of older group.

The second highest activity that is responsible for happiness in both groups is performing hobbies. 22% of former group enjoy doing hobbies whereas 24% of later group seek happiness in hobbies. Other factors contribute to about 14% and 10% for people below 30 and 30 years respectively.

Moving on to the differences, younger people are happier about having good looks while good financial stability makes the older group happy. Good looks gives 18% of younger people happiness while 20% of older group is cheered by financial securities. 14% of the older group are happy about spending time with families and enjoying the company of their family members and travelling is something that provides 15% of younger group with bliss

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2018-06-28 Vedhikaraikar 73 view

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, regarding, second, so, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1124.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30188679245 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64398468932 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575471698113 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.9277511941 43.030603864 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.181818182 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 5.23603664747 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169167242988 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722386489308 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052510353395 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0851149834523 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542695470691 0.0819641961636 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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