You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.
Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter
introduce yourself
explain what is wrong with the furniture
say what action you would like the landlord to take
Dear Mr. Johnson,
I hope this letter met you well. My name is John Smith. I am one of your tenants living in your building at 3 James Collins Street, Liverpool, Oxford. I am in fact, your newest tenant that moved into the apartment 4 on the second floor, two months ago.
I write to express my displeasure on the state of the furniture in the apartment. Generally, the ceiling (roof) virtually in every room, is leaking water everything it rains and considering we are at the peak of the rainy season, it is a nightmare anytime the cloud gathers. In addition, the kitchen sink and the accompanying shelves are falling apart. The same fate awaits the bathroom bathing tub, as cracks could be seen all over it.
I will appreciate if a global assessment of the state of the furniture in the apartment be conducted with the view of getting a vivid overview of the scope of repairs to be carried out.
Furthermore, I advise this exercise can be conducted within this quarter of the year when it is still raining so that all leakages, especially for the ceiling, will easily be identified, unlike during the dry season, when it will be difficult to identify all loopholes.
I look forward to a rapid and favorable response on this request.
Yours sincerely,
John Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... the second floor, two months ago. I write to express my displeasure on the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, second, so, still, well, in addition, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 5.60731707317 464% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1068.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 224.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76785714286 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65873608149 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 106.607317073 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638392857143 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 1.53170731707 718% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 70.2734243272 43.030603864 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112601116873 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436076073995 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606018918664 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0457765291299 0.15604864568 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741217987314 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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