You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The diagram demonstrates how bricks are made for building industry.
Overall, the production of bricks for building industry involves seven stages, beginning with clay digging and finishing with delivery.
First of all, raw clay is collected by an industrial digger and sent to the factory. Following that, a metal grid is put on top of a roller to filter small pieces of clay and tranfered them to the next stage. At the same time, water and sand are added. The mixture is poured into a mold or cut by wired to form bricks then moved to the drying oven for 24 to 48 hours. Before packaging, the brisks are gone through a heating and cooling process. They are heated in the kiln from moderate to high temperature, then rested in a chamber for 48 to 72 hours. Finally the complete brisks are packed and delivered for building purposes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 554, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...rested in a chamber for 48 to 72 hours. Finally the complete brisks are packed and deli...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, then, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 693.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68243243243 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48313338836 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655405405405 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 208.8 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.190270627 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4444444444 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121685168036 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05135588452 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619288930267 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114030121293 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672258071059 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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