After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude.
In your letter:
Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing
Express your appreciation
And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.
Dear Geeta,
I am Monika Ahuja, the girl whom you have helped in a road accident at Lawrence Road, Delhi. I was waiting to write to you for many days, and finally today I got the strength to hold the pen myself. I cannot express how blessed I was to have an angel like you present at the accident site.
I am very grateful towards your courageous act at that severe need of the hour. I got to was told, you carried me in your car to the nearest hospital without waiting for the police to arrive. Also, the doctor has informed us that it was a very mature decision and because of it I had received medical assistance in time. I am very thankful for your help, and I pray for your well-being.
Since I was on a recovery period, we did not get time to say proper thanks to you. My words are not enough to express my gratitude towards the help you have done for me, but I would like to invite you and your family at my place. My family is waiting to meet with all of you.
Let me know if you are free next Sunday for dinner.
Best Wishes
Monika Ahuja
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Geeta, I am Monika Ahuja, the girl whom you have hel...
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Line 3, column 201, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ot the strength to hold the pen myself. I cannot express how blessed I was to hav...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ke you present at the accident site. I am very grateful towards your courageou...
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Line 5, column 81, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...us act at that severe need of the hour. I got to was told, you carried me in your...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.14009661836 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11820186826 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589371980676 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1348429028 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.4166666667 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266531580412 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101188566374 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565646659108 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174466833913 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282758212666 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.44 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.