Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.
Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter
explain why you are writing
describe your circumstances
ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course
Dear Sir,
I am writing to express my interest in the Cloud Computing Course 301 required for a certification in Computer Engineering.
I intended to apply for this course but read in the requirements about the need to complete the Cloud Computing Course 101 which is a compulsory requirement for enrolling in the above mentioned course.
I have a Bachelors degree in Mechanical Engineering, although, i am passionate about computer studies. I love learning about the various parts of a computer and how they connect to make it function effectively. I am also curious to understand the various softwares that exist in the computers and their respective functions.
Hence, I humbly request that an exception be made to accept my bachelors degree to enable me enroll for the course. I would be very grateful if my request is granted as it will aid in achieving my career goals.
I look forward to your favourable response.
Yours faithfully,
Lilian Okoye.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 71, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ourse but read in the requirements about the need to complete the Cloud Computin...
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Line 5, column 84, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d in the requirements about the need to complete the Cloud Computing Course 101 ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...lling in the above mentioned course. I have a Bachelors degree in Mechanical E...
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Line 7, column 64, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ee in Mechanical Engineering, although, i am passionate about computer studies. I...
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Line 7, column 104, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...i am passionate about computer studies. I love learning about the various parts o...
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Line 7, column 212, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...onnect to make it function effectively. I am also curious to understand the vario...
^
Line 9, column 194, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t is granted as it will aid in achieving my career goals. I look forward to yo...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 815.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12578616352 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03208584297 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635220125786 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1579955385 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5555555556 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232384514056 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082833056597 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082614757402 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117479913503 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0904229765842 0.0580467560999 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.