A colleague at work is organizing a goodbye party which you're not able to attend. Write a let
Why you cannot make it yo the party, something good he did for you that you appreciate while working together and state how are you going to get in touch when he is away
Dear Harry,
Hi. How are you doing right now? I am doing fine here at Manila. I am Writing to you because I cannot attend to your party this coming Friday.
Our company will be having a meeting in Singapore since I am a Marketing Head I cannot be absent on that day. I have tried to ask permission with our Vice President but she said that I need to be present in that meeting.
I still remember the time that you have saved me in that board meeting. Back in the days I do not know how to create a presentation but you on the other hand helped me created that presentment. I am thankful up until this day that you taught me a lot of things and skills that I can use in my present job.
You can always stay my apartment. Do not hesitate to give me a call if you are in trouble this is my number 1234567 and also you can send me an email at bil@mail.com.
Take care harry and write back soon.
Best wishes,
Bill
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...write back soon. Best wishes, Bill
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 750.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.12087912088 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27721899728 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60989010989 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8283258574 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.5 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1666666667 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242911149856 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946189581326 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756352703297 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130733813639 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0950523611355 0.0580467560999 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.02 8.71597938144 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.12 7.59969072165 81% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 41.2886597938 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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