Company Top level Authorities should or should not take employees suggestions or ideas to take any decisions. Discuss
Every company try to work often flawless, often diverse and often compelling way to become prime part of their business. Some people thinks top level authorities should take surveys and ideas to take company decisions. Other dispute with that statement and they suggest to not to take any idea from employees. In my Opinion, Employers should communicate with employees and get ideas for betterment of their business.
Firstly, The major reason behind this is because of human psychological reasons because every human have limited vision of thinking but if multiple people suggested a proposal, We will get variety of ideas of it, which will not only beyond one or group of people thinking but it will definitely better for business. For Example, Google worlds largest company take monthly survey from their employees and If they have any idea regarding business the company contribute their time, money and efforts on that idea.
Finally, It have another advantage apart from money making, That kind of survey make employee more important which means employee thinks he is important to the company and he is not just a person sitting on the corner bench with no importance. That thing not only make them feel better but also make them more productive and dedicated to their work.
As I have noted, These kind of survey and suggestions from employee not only make business better but also make employees interconnected with employer and make them loyal to their company which is better for both employee and company.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, regarding, so, apart from, as for, as to, for example, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 5.05154639175 317% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 937.175257732 136% => OK
No of words: 251.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09561752988 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4654949641 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529880478088 0.622605031667 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.9 290.88556701 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.4497846079 44.8134815571 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.111111111 76.5299724578 186% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8888888889 16.8248392259 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 4.34317383033 299% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304629995571 0.216113520407 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155884076819 0.0766984524023 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.171096520303 0.0603063233224 284% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18637001284 0.12726935374 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.154425145079 0.0580467560999 266% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 8.37731958763 197% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 70.7449484536 62% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 7.45979381443 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 8.71597938144 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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