Many people think regions affect successful persons. What is your opinion about native regions and accomplished person influence on the regions they belong to?

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 394, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...stories has nothing to do about regions its about a person ability and will to work...
^^^
Line 3, column 284, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...work with his passion to help others. I dont know what to say him because he own man...
^^^^
Line 3, column 302, Rule ID: SAY_TELL[1]
Message: 'Say' cannot be followed by a direct personal object. Did you mean 'tell'?
Suggestion: tell
...ion to help others. I dont know what to say him because he own many estate in Pakis...
^^^
Line 3, column 325, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun estate seems to be countable; consider using: 'many estates'.
Suggestion: many estates
...ont know what to say him because he own many estate in Pakistan for welfare and worlds larg...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'worlds the largest'.
Suggestion: worlds the largest
...many estate in Pakistan for welfare and worlds largest welfare ambulance service but he still ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...ur the king of heart and land of Sindh. he send 21,000 people to study abroad. Som...
^^
Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'sends'.
Suggestion: sends
...the king of heart and land of Sindh. he send 21,000 people to study abroad. Some bec...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1125.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76694915254 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26695707269 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618644067797 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1704741228 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5384615385 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1538461538 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.84615384615 7.06120827912 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281320572654 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917136718198 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767342145858 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160059317041 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0851286199446 0.056905535591 150% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.