Doctors in many countries believe that people are not getting enough exercise.
What might be causing this lack of exercise? What can be done to address the issue?
Experts in the field of medicine are of the opinion that the amount of required exercise is falling over the years. This essay
will elaborate on the reasons for this and how we can improve the situation.
The predominant cause of this concern is the overall urbanization of our surroundings which has led to fewer number of
parks and walkways. Moreover, if you want to still exercise the only option remains is the paid facilities such as gyms &
yoga classes. An average person, for instance, spends over 10% of his monthly salary on fitness related activities.
Everyone can not afford this and therefore opt out to save on this expenditure. Another reason for the decline in physical
activity is related to the growth of mobile phones and other devices. With the advent of electronic devices, people have
become lazy and like to spend their free time on social media platforms or by playing games. A good example for this the
online video game called PUBG, where more that 50% of the young population of India spends a minimum of 3 hours daily
that could have been utilized for exercise.
The trend where more and more individuals are choosing to avoid any form of cardio or muscle building trainning is only
rising . If this doesnt stop, the health issues in relation to this will significantly increase. A simple way to curb this is by
educating the public on the ill-effects of such a lifestyle. Communities can raise awareness about this though schools and
social gatherings. The government can also play a vital role by developing places where citizens can exercise for free and
for as long as they desire. In the city of Mumbai, the city coucil built a walking pathway under a busy flyover, which gave the
residents in that locality a new place to walk and the number of users doubled in a single week.
In conclusion, there are many reasons to stop oneself from exercising, but with the right advice and a little help, people can
get back on track to live a healthy lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...uscle building trainning is only rising . If this doesnt stop, the health issues ...
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Line 14, column 18, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ing trainning is only rising . If this doesnt stop, the health issues in relation to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 26.3917525773 197% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 937.175257732 179% => OK
No of words: 347.0 206.0 168% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82708933718 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 3.78020617076 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53234508946 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 127.690721649 166% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610951008646 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 290.88556701 182% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 8.0 0.824742268041 970% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.5080791572 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.6875 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6875 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.29896907216 419% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154067473122 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490513110581 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037187135841 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0437245579417 0.12726935374 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373293274493 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 41.2886597938 223% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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