A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• suggest an interesting part of the city to live in
• describe the public transport in your city
• say how your friend can meet new people there
Dear Jenny,
I am glad to hear that you have just been promoted the manager position in the new branch in my city.
As you know, the weather is in winter now and my city is little colder than other parts of Vietnam. Therefore, I suggest you visit Eaton mall as soon as you arrive so that we can buy warm clothes for you. You must love the mall because it has various nice clothes items with affordable prices.
You will be also satisfied with the public transportation as buses and trains in my city are so fast and on time. Every 10 minutes we have a bus or a train, so you will never be late.
I would say that, if you are a social and energetic person, it is so perfect for you to live in my place. You will be surrounded by five millions of friendly and generous habitants who are willing to pay you a beer even though they don’t know you. I recommend you to go Central Perks, my favorite bar, to make friends and enjoy our local culture.
Let me know when you are on arrive. I am waiting to pick you at the airport.
With love,
Wendy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 132, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: 'five million'.
Suggestion: five million
... in my place. You will be surrounded by five millions of friendly and generous habitants who are...
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Line 8, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...you at the airport. With love, Wendy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 848.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.1568627451 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20154257199 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642156862745 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8131726231 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.6666666667 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132628826307 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510513739746 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372872019491 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.069716952953 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383606773935 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.55 8.71597938144 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.