A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
tell your friend how they can contact you when you are away
give instructions about how to care for your pet
describe other things they will need to do to take care of your house
Dear Sam,
Thank you for agreeing to manage things at my house and take care of my cat Bubbles while I am away in Mexico. I really appreciate it; I don't know what I would do if you hadn't helped me.
During the following 2 weeks, I will be staying in a Central Mexico Hotel in a room 102. If you have any reason to talk to me or ask anything, you can contact me through my room's phone which is 525019834. You can call me any time, but first, I want to make sure that you know some details about my cat.
Bubbles has recently lost a tooth, and it is difficult for him to chew his regular food. He requires a special diet, so I want to ask you to feed him with smashed boiled eggs and milk only. Also, a vet prescribed the cat some droplets that he must take them twice a day; you can find them on a shelf in the bathroom.
Besides that, please water my orchids every day and move them from the balcony. It is getting hot during the day and I don't want the flowers to die. I will also appreciate it if you will vacuum the house twice a week.
Thank you again for helping me. Call me or text me if you have any questions regarding the house or the cat. I will see you soon.
Take care,
Julia.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, really, regarding, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 32.9175257732 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 969.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 240.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.0375 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.04511188909 2.54303337028 80% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579166666667 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7920044455 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.6 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166751449093 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621373626731 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450925454653 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101963684999 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399513569783 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 89.08 70.7449484536 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.86 8.71597938144 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.