In the past, most people spent their entire career working for one company, whereas people nowadays move from one job to another.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of each? Which do you think is better?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Previously, people used to think that the best way to build a career was to stick to one company for years; however, this pattern has changed, and these days, people are jumping from one company to another changing their jobs like gloves. I consider changing jobs as a better strategy to develop a career but will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of both.
The main advantage of working for one company for a long time is the reduction of the employee's level of stress. People feel more relaxed in a familiar environment with the co-workers they have known for a while. They feel safe and supported by others and, thus, stress out less than those who tend to change their workplaces often. In Ukraine, for example, people of some professions, like teachers, devote their lives working at one place in the whole career because school members treat each other as a member of one big family creating a comfort zone for everybody in it.
Meanwhile, such a monotone life can lower a person's productivity level. They get used to the routine without challenge and, therefore, may lose the passion for self-improvement. Perhaps, that is the reason why the Ministry of Education in Ukraine demands all teachers to spend at least 30 hours on qualification courses annually.
If you look at the bright side of the constant change in workplaces, the most significant benefit would be a valuable experience. The knowledge and skills people obtain working in multiple places help them build an impressive resume. As a result, it will significantly reverse one from other candidates trying for a job of their dreams. For example, my husband has worked for three companies in the last ten years and received only the best characteristics from each of them. Recently, he was selected from many candidates for a position of the General Manager on Amazon, and the main reason for that was the successful experience and skills he had got from the previous jobs.
However, changing jobs can impact people's personal lives significantly. Because a new job can be located long far from one's home, they must leave their houses and travel somewhere where the new office is. For many people, especially with families and children, it is enormously hard to move altogether. In America, for example, 25 per cent of divorces are caused by distance couples have working apart in different states. In addition to that, their children suffer too.
To conclude, I believe that building a career it is better to have multiple-jobs experience than dedicate the whole life working at one place. With both strategies are not perfect, people should consider possible benefits and risks and make wise decisions on the way to achieve their career goals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 45, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...while, such a monotone life can lower a persons productivity level. They get used to th...
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Line 9, column 120, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... a new job can be located long far from ones home, they must leave their houses and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, at least, for example, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2273.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 457.0 315.596192385 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97374179431 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69278934221 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 176.041082164 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573304157549 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 706.5 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3080158886 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.238095238 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7619047619 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371714830324 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100339688852 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755942288433 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188220047458 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0830931192324 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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