A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
tell your friend how they can contact you when you are away
give instructions about how to care for your pet
describe other things they will need to do to take care of your house
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sam,
Thank you for agreeing to house-sit for me while I will be away in London. I am writing to give some guidance on things to be done.
I am going to stay at my cousin's place for two weeks, so if you need to reach me, you can freely phone me and send a message on WhatsApp. All the phone numbers are on a sticky note which I've left on the fridge.
My cat needs to be fed twice a day, and you must feed him with only mashed cat food and warm milk because of his toothache. Also, you will have to take him to a vet for a scheduled appointment next Monday at 10 am; the clinic is on the corner of the street at which my house is.
Besides that, there is not much you have to do at the house. First, water my orchids daily and keep them away from direct sunlight. Also, check my mailbox every day; if you find any letter, except for advertisements, please lay them on the microwave. Finally, for security reasons, make sure you lock the front door and shut the windows when you leave; don't forget to keep the outside lights on for the night.
Thanks again for helping me out. What about catching up for coffee when I return, to discuss how I can repay you?
See you soon.
Warm wishes,
Martha.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...hone numbers are on a sticky note which Ive left on the fridge. My cat needs to...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...or and shut the windows when you leave; dont forget to keep the outside lights on fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, if, so, while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 986.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.19574468085 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09854117343 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646808510638 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7471422103 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.4285714286 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7857142857 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20817561933 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734385122267 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528297130413 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122116104031 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401696255872 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.45 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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