Dear Martin
Its good news that you are taking a break from work and have planned for vacation. As you asked for my suggestion, I would like to recommend you to visit the Taj Mahal in India, one of seven wonders of the world.
As I visited the Taj Mahal last year in winters, which is the best time to go. I was amazed to see that architectural marvel built in the 17th century by the emperor Shahjahan. Not only the design but the vicinity nearby it is full of greenery. When you go up the roof a scenic beauty of the river can be viewed. A breeze of cool air comes from there.
When you are finished seeing the monument and leave for the gate. Stalls full of traditional material are lined up outside from where you can purchase the local speciality. The commuting is quite easy and a cab can be booked from the hotel room.
I stayed with my family in the Sheraton hotel situated on the main street. They can arrange for you some local guides, but in case if you want to hire on your own then lookout for genuine guides who will be helping you in the sightseeing, it will save you a lot of your precious time instead of doing research by yourself where to go.
I hope you have a pleasant experience and stay over there.
Your's Truely
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 246, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...vicinity nearby it is full of greenery. When you go up the roof a scenic beauty of t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 237.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35443037975 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24590717934 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607594936709 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3751612712 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.7142857143 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9285714286 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.64285714286 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.408982850615 0.216113520407 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113839882991 0.0766984524023 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108847927818 0.0603063233224 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218683943095 0.12726935374 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0891784366517 0.0580467560999 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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