The friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He / She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
1. why you think your friend would enjoy a camping.
2. Describe some possible disadvantages.
3. Say whether you would like to go camping with your friend.
Dear Betty,
I received your mail yesterday and I am glad you are doing well in this lockdown due to corona virus. I think your idea of going on camping holiday in the summer is fabulous idea. I understand this is going to be your first time camping and you would like my advice on the same.
Firstly, as I said previously this is a fabulous idea. I am confident that you would definitely enjoy the camping holiday. You had always been going on one day treks and short holidays on the beaches therefore, going on camping holiday would not be much difficult for you. Also, after staying indoors in these few months of lockdown, travelling and reconnecting to nature is going to be beneficial for your mental and physical health.
However, I feel that there are few possible disadvantages to the camping trip. One of the major disadvantage is that the trip you have planned is in summer. The area gets very dry and the temperatures usually cross 40 degree Celsius. There is possible chance that you might get dehydrated or suffer from sun stroke. Another issue that I feel would be your inability to speak local language, that is, Spanish. I have read some of the reviews that were posted on tourism page was that the tourists found very difficult to communicate with the local people and convey their needs. In my opinion, I feel it would be advisable to carry water bottle with you all the time, wear a hat and hire a tourist guide who can speak any of the languages that you know and is fluent Spanish as well.
I have looked up the place on the internet and am very excited about the camping holiday. If you don't mind I would also like to accompany you on this trip as I have some vacation time coming up in my office in the coming month and bored of staying indoors. Please do let me know by next week if you have no objections. I am eagerly waiting for your letter.
Yours faithfullly,
Molly
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 421, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...language, that is, Spanish. I have read some of the reviews that were posted on tourism pag...
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Line 5, column 97, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...cited about the camping holiday. If you dont mind I would also like to accompany you...
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Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: BORED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'bored with'?
Suggestion: bored with
...up in my office in the coming month and bored of staying indoors. Please do let me know ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, so, therefore, well, i feel, i think, you know, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 7.48453608247 254% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 53.0 32.9175257732 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 937.175257732 166% => OK
No of words: 348.0 206.0 169% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47413793103 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 3.78020617076 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41015564734 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 127.690721649 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545977011494 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 488.7 290.88556701 168% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6093870955 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9473684211 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3157894737 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36842105263 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353200574915 0.216113520407 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117364561124 0.0766984524023 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0983624070594 0.0603063233224 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232418831565 0.12726935374 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103977539243 0.0580467560999 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 41.2886597938 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.