A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday
describe some possible disadvantages
say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer
Dear Betty,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing to pour in a few suggestions regarding your plan of taking up a camping holiday.
I must say that going on a camping holiday is a wonderful choice you have made to spend summer days. It would give you an opportunity to spend some time close to nature, away from the scorching heat and city pollution. As camping trips are usually organized for groups, people often get a chance to make new friends and socialize during the holiday. You can enjoy the lush green forests at daytime and spend the nights gazing the stars.
Although it is an enjoyable activity, insects and reptiles at night are a major source of concern. Usually the tents provided are of good quality and provide perfect closure of all openings. This prevents any form of crawling creatures or insects making their way into the tent. Therefore, it is just better to take precautions to avoid any form of injury or harm.
I would have loved to join you as well, however, I have already committed for a vacation with my cousins. We have been planning to go to the hill station since a very long time and finally the plans have materialized for this summer. I hope you too enjoy your summer days camping.
Best Wishes
Fatima
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y your summer days camping. Best Wishes Fatima
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, regarding, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59192825112 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38977693587 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659192825112 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2694021402 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.1428571429 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9285714286 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259361929699 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734250179461 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742142896802 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145055642302 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750550579223 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.