The friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He / She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
1. why you think your friend would enjoy a camping.
2. Describe some possible disadvantages.
3. Say whether you would like to go camping with your friend.
Dear Joseph,
I hope you and your family are doing well. It was nice to receive a letter from you yesterday. I’m glad that you’ve decided to go to Gir sanctuary in India for a camping vacation.
Believe me, you wouldn’t want to come back to the hustle and bustle of the city life after experiencing the calmness and serenity of a jungle. Besides, it will also educate you about important survival skills, nutrition and direction. Finally, I must say that the experience of sleeping under an open sky is out of the world. Make sure you do that!
Let me warn you about a few challenges. First, please carry some mosquito repellent with you. If you get bitten by mosquitos, you might get a fever and it may completely ruin your trip. I must also tell you that it is completely ok to feel homesick at first. But please hang in there! You’ll eventually start enjoying it.
To be honest, I would like to come with you on this trip. However, I’ve already been there several times and I want to utilize my leaves for travelling to Japan in December.
All the best for your upcoming adventure. Enjoy it to the fullest.
Warm wishes,
Ashfaq
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, however, if, may, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64563106796 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47460949408 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68932038835 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3983976502 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.8125 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.875 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221679228749 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068322616731 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572141830736 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136019439646 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756565578128 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.8 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.