The graph below shows the price of bananas in 4 different countries from 1996 to 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates data about how much bananas cost in 4 different countries over an 8-year period from 1996 to 2004.
Overall, a considerably upward trend applied to the cost of bananas in Japan, Germany and the USA. The price of bananas experienced a significant fluctuation.
As can be seen from the graph, in 1996, bananas were sold at the same price in Japan and France, at 2 USD/kg, double the cost of bananas in the USA, at 1 USD/kg. The price of bananas in Germany was the second highest price, at 1 USD/kg.
Between 1996 and 2003, there was a pronounced fluctuation in the cost of bananas, at 2 USD/kg, but it saw a minimal decline to 1.5 USD/kg, followed by a recovery to 2.5 USD/kg in 2004. Meanwhile, the cost of bananas witnessed a remarkable fluctuation. From 1996 to 2004, the cost of bananas in Germany and the USA increased minimally to 1.7 and 1.2 USD/kg, respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 38, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
The graph illustrates data about how much bananas cost in 4 different countries o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 32.9175257732 3% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 743.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67295597484 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77523161658 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 127.690721649 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534591194969 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 216.0 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 1.44329896907 485% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1574429965 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.875 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191693745365 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108916134642 0.0766984524023 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631227312334 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142094941563 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057790623666 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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